Cut a lot of dialogue from the written version in order to keep this chapter in a managable length. DON'T WORRY if I like a line enough I'll incorporate it later
Toooootally forgot Davey's meant to be embalmed. Ohwell, I'll fix it when I get home maybe.
Heheheh. I like Owen's face in the first AND the second panel. And... OMFG! Oh, no! Meh, so long as Davey doesn't die, I'm sure I'll be able to live. Oh, and, as always, lovely art work and color choice!
it just adds the effect of OH SHIT HE JUST GOT SHOT
don't worry about it
don't change it
Oh, and, as always, lovely art work and color choice!